Rules for a Good Walk - Free Verse...

Did you get outside today? This is my poem Rules for a Good Walk. The brilliant illustrations are by Lauren O’Neill. Scroll down to see the pages from my notebook that show how I started to write it.

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Rules for a Good Walk is written in free verse, which means you don’t have to rhyme of follow any particular pattern to make your poem. You just write your thoughts, taking a new line as your thoughts move on.

It can still take a lot of work to get it how you like it! When I look back over what I have written I sometimes make changes to ‘strengthen’ my free verse poems. I often use repetition (can you see how many times I wrote ‘put your phone away’?) and alliteration, where some words that are close together start with the same letter (look at ‘slow’, ‘splash’, & ‘shiny’ and ‘show’, ‘stone’, ‘show’, & ‘stick’).

I read it out aloud to myself loads and loads of times to make sure it sounds as good as I can get it - then I type it up!

These pages from my notebook show how I started to get my ideas down. And how many ideas got left out!

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Maybe you can think about everything you did so far today or this week? Then write everything down and pick and choose what you like best to make a free verse poem.

Send me your poems in the message part of the Contact page if you like. I’d love to see them!

Lucinda Jacob